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	<title>Comments on: Writing Lesson 33 &#8211; A Checklist for Revisions</title>
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		<title>By: Alassiel</title>
		<link>http://www.anovelwritingsite.com/2010/04/writing-lesson-33-a-checklist-for-revisions/comment-page-1/#comment-19</link>
		<dc:creator>Alassiel</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 28 Apr 2010 23:23:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for this list.  I checked the weasel words and filters in my work and found a bunch of things that needed changed.  I wouldn&#039;t have thought of that on my own.  Now sometime I need to go through the rest of the list.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for this list.  I checked the weasel words and filters in my work and found a bunch of things that needed changed.  I wouldn&#8217;t have thought of that on my own.  Now sometime I need to go through the rest of the list.</p>
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		<title>By: skmayh</title>
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		<dc:creator>skmayh</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 25 Apr 2010 18:55:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You guys are amazing.  I learn so much every time I read your posts.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You guys are amazing.  I learn so much every time I read your posts.</p>
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