Language usage, Point of View, Research

By Naomi Musch, on May 7th, 2010
Author Intrusion
I’d like to introduce you to a term, if you aren’t familiar with it already, called “author intrusion”. You have author intrusion when you’re reading a story and all of a sudden something is said in a way that pulls you out of the “zone” your imagination is in. It might be a really [...]
Language usage

By Teri Dawn Smith, on April 23rd, 2010
Revision tops the list for the best thing you can do for your story…
but sometimes it’s the most neglected step. Some people don’t revise because their writing seems so personal; it’s their baby, a masterpiece. No one should tinker with it. Others simply refuse to take the time and effort.
But if you’re serious about writing [...]
Characterization, Language usage, Point of View, Showing vs. Telling

By Lynn Dean, on April 16th, 2010
“Showing vs. Telling”
We’ve written much about this concept of using vivid action, description, and dialogue to show what’s happening in a story rather than simply telling readers about what happens.
It would be fitting, perhaps, to “show” you an example.
Below is the first paragraph of a scene in my work in progress (wip), More Precious Than [...]
Characterization, Language usage, Personal Motivation

By Teri Dawn Smith, on March 19th, 2010
A Creativity Tool
At any point when you create your story, you will come to places where you need to do some brainstorming. It could be at the beginning when an idea first begins to germinate. You’ll need to choose your characters, their profession, the goals, conflicts, and more.
Or maybe it’ll be in the middle [...]
Language usage, Showing vs. Telling

By Naomi Musch, on February 26th, 2010
Using Comparisons Brings Life to Dead Adjectives
Whether you are writing a short story, a novel, or a non-fiction essay, you will need to give description, and often times to do so you will use comparison. It’s been said that “nothing means anything except as compared to something else”. In other words, if you say, “The [...]